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Re: Dana's Daring Adventure
by Ace on Wed Mar 05, 2008 3:07 pm
Oh thats o.k........ maybe i could ne a Blastroice or somthin. I like water type poke'mon
Why are you starring at my signature!?!
Re: Dana's Daring Adventure
by Skull Kid on Thu Mar 06, 2008 12:17 am
Would you rather be a Zangoose?
And yes, the next chapter is going to be like a movie, it will have 4 parts, the 3rd part will involve the Palace Paladins more than Dana
And yes, the next chapter is going to be like a movie, it will have 4 parts, the 3rd part will involve the Palace Paladins more than Dana
You can't keep a good... er... bad... er... you can't keep a wierd scarecrow like kid being taken over by a mask down!
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Re: Dana's Daring Adventure
by Ace on Thu Mar 06, 2008 12:39 am
sure Zangoose rocks!
Why are you starring at my signature!?!
Re: Dana's Daring Adventure
by Cyclone on Thu Mar 06, 2008 11:25 am
I hope the next chapter comes soon! Will the chapter about the Palace Paladins have some of their backstory?
Re: Dana's Daring Adventure
by Skull Kid on Fri Mar 14, 2008 3:15 am
Dana's Daring Dragon Defense, or "Big Bad Battle!"
It started that morning, the mission... This mission was so difficult, that the Palace Paladins, Nix, and Artik were going to accompany the Field Members. Destiny and Frost stayed behind, they felt the ominence in the air. The Breloom and Little Ralts also came to help. "it's all of us agenst the world..." said Keaton. "We attack at dawn!" said DP joyusly. For a deadly plant warrior, she acted like such a child. Keaton sighed. 'What are your names anyway?" asked Dana. "I am Orchid." answered The Breloom. "And I am Picori!" said Little Ralts.
Along the path the warriors they came, Draco Mountain in the distance. Picori began playing his guitar. It didn't take long for DP to take up a song. The others picked up on it too.
"Prelude to a Climax" by DP
Come on dear friends, it's time to go!
But it seems so scary though...
We won't run! We'll never break!
This might be a big mistake...
Come on mom, please cheer up!
Frost ran off like a scared Piplup!
Yeah, that was very funny!
Come on folks, try to be more sunny!
Come on my friends, run in fighting!
Am I the only one who noticed the lightning?
At Picori's observation, everyone halted. It had indeed started storming. Try as they might, they couldn't find decent shelter. Dana transformed into an entirley new pokemon. It looked like a mole. It had silver fur. On either shoulder was a hollow half-drill. It had sharp eyes and a pointy nose. It's tail had a tiny drill at the end. "What's that?" asked Picori. "Diggut" said Dana. The two drill bits on each shoulder expanded, encasing Dana's body to her legs. She tucked her legs in, and the drill at the end of her tail was all that could be seen. She was now one big drill. She used an attack called Earth Rumble. Soon a sizable cave was made, sheltered from the rain. The nature of the Diggut hindered Dana. Although it was ghost type, it was also rock type, so the rain hurt her more than anything else.
Making sure everyone was in the cave, she turned into yet another new pokemon. It was simmilar in appearence to a human little girl. The only diffrence was that it's eyes were aglow with a pink light. "This storm won't stop until 11:45 this evening..." she said in a distant voice. "What's this one?" asked Picori again "Psykid..." answered Dana before turning back into a Mew. "We're gonna be here awhile, does anyone have a story?" asked Nix. "How did the Paladins start?" asked Kiki. "A good question, with a lengthy answer, you see, it all began with two little Ralts..."
The male Ralts was fiesty, a born fighter. The girl was too, but she tried to hide it. Niether of them knew a Zangoose was wacthing them, stopping other pokemon from attacking them...
To be continued...
When I get around to it...
No seriously, my schedule is wierd...
It started that morning, the mission... This mission was so difficult, that the Palace Paladins, Nix, and Artik were going to accompany the Field Members. Destiny and Frost stayed behind, they felt the ominence in the air. The Breloom and Little Ralts also came to help. "it's all of us agenst the world..." said Keaton. "We attack at dawn!" said DP joyusly. For a deadly plant warrior, she acted like such a child. Keaton sighed. 'What are your names anyway?" asked Dana. "I am Orchid." answered The Breloom. "And I am Picori!" said Little Ralts.
Along the path the warriors they came, Draco Mountain in the distance. Picori began playing his guitar. It didn't take long for DP to take up a song. The others picked up on it too.
"Prelude to a Climax" by DP
Come on dear friends, it's time to go!
But it seems so scary though...
We won't run! We'll never break!
This might be a big mistake...
Come on mom, please cheer up!
Frost ran off like a scared Piplup!
Yeah, that was very funny!
Come on folks, try to be more sunny!
Come on my friends, run in fighting!
Am I the only one who noticed the lightning?
At Picori's observation, everyone halted. It had indeed started storming. Try as they might, they couldn't find decent shelter. Dana transformed into an entirley new pokemon. It looked like a mole. It had silver fur. On either shoulder was a hollow half-drill. It had sharp eyes and a pointy nose. It's tail had a tiny drill at the end. "What's that?" asked Picori. "Diggut" said Dana. The two drill bits on each shoulder expanded, encasing Dana's body to her legs. She tucked her legs in, and the drill at the end of her tail was all that could be seen. She was now one big drill. She used an attack called Earth Rumble. Soon a sizable cave was made, sheltered from the rain. The nature of the Diggut hindered Dana. Although it was ghost type, it was also rock type, so the rain hurt her more than anything else.
Making sure everyone was in the cave, she turned into yet another new pokemon. It was simmilar in appearence to a human little girl. The only diffrence was that it's eyes were aglow with a pink light. "This storm won't stop until 11:45 this evening..." she said in a distant voice. "What's this one?" asked Picori again "Psykid..." answered Dana before turning back into a Mew. "We're gonna be here awhile, does anyone have a story?" asked Nix. "How did the Paladins start?" asked Kiki. "A good question, with a lengthy answer, you see, it all began with two little Ralts..."
The male Ralts was fiesty, a born fighter. The girl was too, but she tried to hide it. Niether of them knew a Zangoose was wacthing them, stopping other pokemon from attacking them...
To be continued...
When I get around to it...
No seriously, my schedule is wierd...
You can't keep a good... er... bad... er... you can't keep a wierd scarecrow like kid being taken over by a mask down!
Forum Family:
Dad: Triple H
Sister: Starchild
Brother: Cyclone
Forum Family:
Dad: Triple H
Sister: Starchild
Brother: Cyclone
Re: Dana's Daring Adventure
by Cyclone on Fri Mar 14, 2008 7:10 am
Cool it is starting! Who is saying the light blue and green?
Re: Dana's Daring Adventure
by Skull Kid on Sun Mar 16, 2008 11:18 pm
Light Blue-Picori
Green-DP
Green-DP
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Re: Dana's Daring Adventure
by Cyclone on Mon Mar 17, 2008 7:07 am
The new chapter will be up tomorrow right?
Re: Dana's Daring Adventure
by Skull Kid on Mon Mar 17, 2008 11:19 pm
not quite, soon though
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Re: Dana's Daring Adventure
by Skull Kid on Tue Mar 18, 2008 11:15 pm
IT IS NOW!!! FACE THE FINALE!!!
Pokemon from the forest formed bands easily. A sensable Nuzleaf and an easly excited Budew formed one such band. They helped eachother, one grew berries, and one battled. Watching all of them from a large redwood, was a Breloom. He could she the coming threat. Armored Dragonite and Tyranitar ravaged the lands. The Breloom waited and watched as the others grew.
He had no one of his own, no friends or family. He'd had a love and a child, but they fled in the night to escape the evil forces. He didn't feel in the least betrayed, it made sense to flee while they could. He however, would not leave his home. The forces of destruction were coming fast. The forest that all the pokemon lived in was in peril. The time was now. The Breloom jumped down. The Zangoose instantly challanged him. "We need to defend the forest!" he pointed a claw ot the oncoming tide of pokemon. "How?" he asked. The Nuzleaf and Budew came up too. "If we can work together..." The Budew, being a young child,.was talking about how she wanted to be a princesss and have a palace. The Breloom chuckled. "If we can fend them off, then you can have your palace." Both Ralts used Protect to form a small shield ball. The Breloom hit it with Mach Punch. It thinned the foes' ranks considerably, causing a rippling explosion. The Nuzleaf used Bullet Seed to fend them off, while the Budew sent them to sleep with Grasswhistle. Soon the foes had left. The Breloom smiled. "Now, I shall work on your palace little one!" he said. "We'll work on the palace!" came the Nuzleaf's voice. "If we could stop them, what else could we do?" he contined reflectivly. With that, the Palace Paladins were born, they trained and lived together, and became some of the strongest pokemon ever.
"Wow, that was awesome!" said Kiki excitedly. Then they heard the growl. She should have kept hidden. She should have ignored it, but she didn't. Quite the contrary, she floated out, right into battle. A viscious black-scaled Rayquaza stood, coiled and ready to strike. Dana's were filled with the light of battle. The guardian of the last three gatehouses had arrvied.
It tried to strike, but Dana was faster. She turned into Shaymin, then used Rollout. She pulled up large spikes of earth with her that stopped the Rayquaza's advances. When she stopped rolling however, he did a powerful Draco Meteor. She tranformed now into a Skarmory, attacking with a powerful Steel Wing. The Raquaza knocked her back. She used Substitute to make two dupilacates of herself. The two turned into Articuno and Moltres, while she turned into Zapdos. She then used Thunder, Fire Blast, and Blizzard at the same time. The Raquaza dodged it, but the Tri Beam destroyed the last three gatehouses. The Paladins rushed in to do the raid on Magnicorp. The others rushed in to help, only Dana remained behind. She changed into a Munchlax, then used Last Resort. The huge aura grabbed Raquaza, choking it, then throwing it. It used Hyper Beam on her. She changed back into a Mew, and fell to the ground. In her arms was nestled an egg. But she would never rise again.
She smiled weakly as the collar broke off of the Raquaza. Everyone rushed from the Magnicorp building. "Come on Dana, get up..." said Kiki. Dana shook her head. Althought a smile was on her face, pain was in her heart. She beckoned over Artik, and gave her the egg. "Take care of it..." she said. "U-understood..." said Artik. She turned to the Paladins. "Thanks for helping my friends, did you defeat Magnicorp?" They nodded. "Good job..." The light was fading from her blue eyes. Dana closed her eyes. "Be well my friends..." she said.
Everyone cried that day. They missed the enthusiasam, the sunny disposition, everything... The Fullon Focus insitute made a holiday to remeber her, Dana Day. But for Kiki and the others, it was more than just a day, it was all the time. A new recruit had been added to the Institute ranks as well. A purple-furred shy little Mew came in for her first day. "C-Constansce reporting for duty ma'am!" she said shyly. "No need to be so formal..." it was the voice of an Ambipom. Kiki had become a battle instructor. Constance's was by herself, but a small Shroomish named Sutake and her bacame friends. While Keaton never again saw his love or child, he fell in love with the Breloom from the forest.
And so ends the tale of a brave young Mew, and begins the tale a shy polite one, and her Shroomish friend...
To Be Continued...
In the Sequal...
Next: Constance's Curious Exploration!
Pokemon from the forest formed bands easily. A sensable Nuzleaf and an easly excited Budew formed one such band. They helped eachother, one grew berries, and one battled. Watching all of them from a large redwood, was a Breloom. He could she the coming threat. Armored Dragonite and Tyranitar ravaged the lands. The Breloom waited and watched as the others grew.
He had no one of his own, no friends or family. He'd had a love and a child, but they fled in the night to escape the evil forces. He didn't feel in the least betrayed, it made sense to flee while they could. He however, would not leave his home. The forces of destruction were coming fast. The forest that all the pokemon lived in was in peril. The time was now. The Breloom jumped down. The Zangoose instantly challanged him. "We need to defend the forest!" he pointed a claw ot the oncoming tide of pokemon. "How?" he asked. The Nuzleaf and Budew came up too. "If we can work together..." The Budew, being a young child,.was talking about how she wanted to be a princesss and have a palace. The Breloom chuckled. "If we can fend them off, then you can have your palace." Both Ralts used Protect to form a small shield ball. The Breloom hit it with Mach Punch. It thinned the foes' ranks considerably, causing a rippling explosion. The Nuzleaf used Bullet Seed to fend them off, while the Budew sent them to sleep with Grasswhistle. Soon the foes had left. The Breloom smiled. "Now, I shall work on your palace little one!" he said. "We'll work on the palace!" came the Nuzleaf's voice. "If we could stop them, what else could we do?" he contined reflectivly. With that, the Palace Paladins were born, they trained and lived together, and became some of the strongest pokemon ever.
"Wow, that was awesome!" said Kiki excitedly. Then they heard the growl. She should have kept hidden. She should have ignored it, but she didn't. Quite the contrary, she floated out, right into battle. A viscious black-scaled Rayquaza stood, coiled and ready to strike. Dana's were filled with the light of battle. The guardian of the last three gatehouses had arrvied.
It tried to strike, but Dana was faster. She turned into Shaymin, then used Rollout. She pulled up large spikes of earth with her that stopped the Rayquaza's advances. When she stopped rolling however, he did a powerful Draco Meteor. She tranformed now into a Skarmory, attacking with a powerful Steel Wing. The Raquaza knocked her back. She used Substitute to make two dupilacates of herself. The two turned into Articuno and Moltres, while she turned into Zapdos. She then used Thunder, Fire Blast, and Blizzard at the same time. The Raquaza dodged it, but the Tri Beam destroyed the last three gatehouses. The Paladins rushed in to do the raid on Magnicorp. The others rushed in to help, only Dana remained behind. She changed into a Munchlax, then used Last Resort. The huge aura grabbed Raquaza, choking it, then throwing it. It used Hyper Beam on her. She changed back into a Mew, and fell to the ground. In her arms was nestled an egg. But she would never rise again.
She smiled weakly as the collar broke off of the Raquaza. Everyone rushed from the Magnicorp building. "Come on Dana, get up..." said Kiki. Dana shook her head. Althought a smile was on her face, pain was in her heart. She beckoned over Artik, and gave her the egg. "Take care of it..." she said. "U-understood..." said Artik. She turned to the Paladins. "Thanks for helping my friends, did you defeat Magnicorp?" They nodded. "Good job..." The light was fading from her blue eyes. Dana closed her eyes. "Be well my friends..." she said.
Everyone cried that day. They missed the enthusiasam, the sunny disposition, everything... The Fullon Focus insitute made a holiday to remeber her, Dana Day. But for Kiki and the others, it was more than just a day, it was all the time. A new recruit had been added to the Institute ranks as well. A purple-furred shy little Mew came in for her first day. "C-Constansce reporting for duty ma'am!" she said shyly. "No need to be so formal..." it was the voice of an Ambipom. Kiki had become a battle instructor. Constance's was by herself, but a small Shroomish named Sutake and her bacame friends. While Keaton never again saw his love or child, he fell in love with the Breloom from the forest.
And so ends the tale of a brave young Mew, and begins the tale a shy polite one, and her Shroomish friend...
To Be Continued...
In the Sequal...
Next: Constance's Curious Exploration!
You can't keep a good... er... bad... er... you can't keep a wierd scarecrow like kid being taken over by a mask down!
Forum Family:
Dad: Triple H
Sister: Starchild
Brother: Cyclone
Forum Family:
Dad: Triple H
Sister: Starchild
Brother: Cyclone
Re: Dana's Daring Adventure
by gamequeen on Wed Mar 19, 2008 6:04 am
Wow........that was good, sad..but good. 
It is the branch that bends that dosn't break..
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Re: Dana's Daring Adventure
by Cyclone on Wed Mar 19, 2008 7:13 am
That was sad! Hope the sequel comes soon!
Re: Dana's Daring Adventure
by Skull Kid on Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:18 pm
Oh it'll come, you'll be walking along, minding your own buisness, then BOOM!!!
You can't keep a good... er... bad... er... you can't keep a wierd scarecrow like kid being taken over by a mask down!
Forum Family:
Dad: Triple H
Sister: Starchild
Brother: Cyclone
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