The Briney Three: Skeet's Revenge!

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The Briney Three: Skeet's Revenge!

Post by Wynn on Sun Mar 30, 2008 6:37 am

[If you don't understand the story, read "The Briney Three" and "The Briney Three Sails Again!" in the topic "Way with Words!" in the forum "Anything Else"]



While Drew did sail and Nate took stock

The Briney Three did hit a rock

No damage done, they went ahead

Skeet overboard had hit her head...





1: Isle of the Moon

Skeet sat up, her head ached. She scanned the horizon. She was on an island shaped somewhat like a crecent moon. She walkd along the border. Still a little shooken up, she wouldn't talk when she ran into the natives. Curious people the were. They wore thick hooded jackets made from wool. Skeet sat down, and lost herself in old memories. Being four, what she could remember was't much, but what she could remember was sad. Her parents had owned a diner, but they weren't the happiest people. Drew and Nate often asked about what the bruses on her wrists had come from. Even though she'd trust them with her life, she couldn't tell them, not yet...



Her mother and father couldn't beat eachother, they needed to be fit to keep money coming in. But nothing kept them from beating thier child. When she was kidnapped, she felt almost happy. The memory of what happened that day came flooding back to her...



She worked. Under lash and whip, she worked. She moved rocks, pulled spiky and poisionus plants, and other things. Suddenly, two boys got a sneaky expression. While the older one got the ship, the smaller one with glasses came up to her. "Want to come with us?" he asked. She nodded. He took her arm and ran. Together they boarded the ship. Drew did what ran through his blood for centuries, he sailed. The curses of the kidnaper could be heard in the distance.



Skeet missed them very much. Although they could be a bit thick at times, they were her family now. They thought it odd when a four-year-old began to cook and clean for them, but Skeet insisted that it was fine. She had defeated the Kracken and the Black Claws by herself, so she could hold her own if she needed. But that didn't make her miss Drew or Nate any less. She looked at the sky, when a voice distracted her. "You!" came a familar voice. She fled, as fast as she could. Once she was sure she was a safe distance, she began to sceme. The revenge of Skeet La' Fone Briney would be swift and merciless. But she'd need help, and lots of it. She saw in the distance a small house on a mountain. She started towards it, thinking she might find help there.



[I'm gonna steal Keaton's little thingy]

Next: Now it's on Miss La' Fone!
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Re: The Briney Three: Skeet's Revenge!

Post by Cyclone on Sun Mar 30, 2008 8:11 am

This should most likely be in Fan fiction. But I can see why it was put here. So you are making it a story now? Well keep it up! Good Luck!





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Re: The Briney Three: Skeet's Revenge!

Post by Skull Kid on Sun Mar 30, 2008 11:16 pm

Fan Fiction is for people who made video game stories. The Briney Three aren't from a video game, so it would go here
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Re: The Briney Three: Skeet's Revenge!

Post by Cyclone on Mon Mar 31, 2008 11:03 am

Thanks for fixing that!





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Re: The Briney Three: Skeet's Revenge!

Post by Skull Kid on Mon Mar 31, 2008 11:17 pm

No problem
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Re: The Briney Three: Skeet's Revenge!

Post by Cyclone on Tue Apr 01, 2008 7:03 am

I fixed the misspelling in the title.





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