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Post by Skull Kid on Tue Mar 04, 2008 12:19 am

nope, but finding a way to blend all these different storylines would help, it's supposesd to be one story]
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Post by Cyclone on Tue Mar 04, 2008 10:15 am

That is the secret to this story's sucess. I will post the next chapter soon I hope.

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Post by Ace on Tue Mar 04, 2008 3:19 pm

So Kent find Keishi, Fr'nack and jasmine meet up, but i'm unsure about Karrat though.
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Post by Skull Kid on Wed Mar 05, 2008 2:24 am

It's up to DP how they meet, so I can'yt tell you how that'll happen
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Post by Picori on Thu Mar 06, 2008 4:32 am

Melody walked down the path, taking careful measure not to look into anyone she met's eyes. Her shyness came frm her parent's sudden and untimely death. Ever sience then, she hasn't had friends, not even a temporary aquaintance. She wouldn't even say "Hello" to the passerby.

Nothing could fill the void. But she didn't even try, and she knew it. Her gift of healing harm was useless with no one to heal, "I've got to meet new people..." she thought to herself.

But in her heart she felt that no one would ever come to think of her as friend, no one...
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Post by Cyclone on Mon Mar 17, 2008 11:24 am

I am finally going to make the next chapter!

Frnack had just saw a strange girl. But before she could say much she passed out. He went over and picked her up. He carried her to a nearby town and gave her to the Nurse. Immediately the nurse got a shocked look on her face. "This girl is different", the nurse said.

"How is she different?" Frnack had to ask. Just then the was exploded. A man in an Iron suit burst in through the hole he started destroing everything in sight.

Just when the cruel figure looked at Frnack and was about to destroy him with his magical mace, a sound was heard. I was a rather low moaning sound. It was the girl he found! Then he stood to protect her with his life. He was suddenly thrust into the jungle. Everything was gone except that girl.

Using his Pyrokinetic prowess he created a fire to keep then warm. He stared at the girl she looked so familliar... He couldn't put his hand on it. After shruging off the weird feeling he bowed his head and went to sleep. But in his sleep all he could was the face of that girl. Then suddenly he jolted upright.

"How did we get here anyway?" He hadn't thought about that at all! He looked at the girl and saw that she had a strange pendent on her neck! Then he remembered where he had seen it! It was the Stone! The stone was spoken of in legends. There was seven of them. Each was given to a master of a certain power. Now he knew why that man with the mace had wanted her! She was one of the seven!


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Post by Cyclone on Tue Mar 18, 2008 1:02 pm

The Legend...

Once upon a time there was an evil creature upon the Earth. He was called The Consumer.

Whatever the consumer touched he absorbed and got bigger. He kept getting bigger and was threatening the health of the people in the country.

One day seven kids all had a strange dream they dreamed that a stone was going to come from the sky. The kids met eachother for the first time at the spot where the stone was coming.

When the stone hit the kids ran up to the stone and they all touched it. At the moment the stone gave off a very high energy source that the Consumer wanted. He ran to where the stone was and he saw the kids there.

With their hands still on the stone they shot out a beam out of their hands. Where the beams met they created a hole. Not just a regular hole though. They had created a hole in dimensions. The force of this hole consumed the Consumer and then the hole swiftly vanished. The stone had given the kids power.

The stone then shrunk and broke into seven pieces each one going to one of the kids. The kids then left for their towns with the stone and the mysterious power within it.

The kids grew up and their decendants seperated and their the story of the Chosen passed into legend.

But there was more, some people believe that certain decendants still have these powers and those stones...


Just to let you all know that the decendants of the chosen are

Keshi
Frnack
Jasmine
Kent
Lance
Karrat
Melody

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Post by Starchild on Wed Mar 19, 2008 12:10 am

Karrat continued on her way, sad and lonly. She'd given up hope of finding anyone. She continued along the way, humming a tune. Her gold armband began to glimmer. "Hm..." when it glimmered, it meant another decendant of the stone was nearby. Her stone was really more of a metal, but it was hers nonetheless.

But suddenly, a ghastly creature appeared behind her. She wasn't really a fighter at heart. She ran as fast as she could.
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Post by gamequeen on Wed Mar 19, 2008 5:36 am

Black..that was all Jasmine seen in here half asleep state, except for a glance of sight every so often.

Stiring Jasmine rolled onto her side, but when her body pressed into the soft grass bed the boy had made for her she awoke with a start. Jumping up she weilded her kinetic sword,and glanced around ready for attack, but outside the lump of the person there with her she saw nothing but firelight.

"Where am I?" She thought to herself, "And who is laying over there?" Suddenly sleepy she strained her tired mind, "What is the last thing i remember?" suddenly she remembered falling in front of the boy she was going to talk with. But what had happened after that? Then with a flash of light she remembered a glancing memory of that boy jumping in front of her protectively. "But why would he do that?" "He dosn't even know me?"

After awhile she resigned to figure it out later, if that was in fact the boy laying over there he hadn't done her any harm so far, so he most likely didn't have bad intentions. So she slowly, and tiredly sliped back into the soft grass bed.

Why, was this boy so nice to her? Her entire life,{so far as she could remember it}, no one had showed her even a scrap of deccency. So why now? Why this boy? These thoughts were her last as she finally drifted off into a peacefull sleep.
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Post by Cyclone on Wed Mar 19, 2008 7:18 am

This is getting deep! I like it!

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Post by Skull Kid on Fri Apr 11, 2008 12:56 pm

Keshi convered his cells into a missle-shaped projectile, his Cell Rocket that he used to get places fast. He suddenly bumped into a tree. His cells converged to form his body to the letter, his outfit, even the individual hairs on his head. He feel unconsious, but not before glimpsing a shadowy figure above him...
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Post by J Box on Wed Apr 16, 2008 11:22 am

Lance was keeping as quiet as possible, the reason why? Well about 4 days previous a small girl had apeared out of nowhere right in front of him! Lance dashed away but kept an eye on her. He could fell wierd electric currents comeing from the thing on her arm. "Or, at least it feels like electricity" Lance thought to himself. On the end of the 2nd night of folowing her she sat down under a tree. Suddenly it felt like she new he was there. Lance hid higher up in the tree because she could still be danderous. "If she can pop out of thin air there is no telling what she could do if i startled her. I supose i could fight her with my saber..."

But fighting was the last thing he wanted to do right now. The week before the girl had apeared Lance had fought of fifty strange men strying to kill him. They had electrical suits with hi tech wepons, lance had shorted out the suits then took care of them with his saber. Lance continued to folow the girl waiting for a good time to introduce himself. One day her armband began to shine then a strange creature apeared and the girl ran. Lance shot every bit of energy he had at the creature then slashed madly, but it was already gone. when he cought up to the girl she seemed very frightened. He said, "Hi, my names Lance whats yours'?
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Post by Ace on Sun May 04, 2008 1:20 am

Sry it took so long but here is my part.

" uhhhh......" Kent was never more confused in his life. Here he found a small boy then he zooms away in a rocket type thing. And when he hits a tree he became a letter. Kent walked over and picked up the letter, well tried to, when he did it yelled at him and he was so suprised he fell backwards and his head hit a rock and fell uncounis.
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Post by Starchild on Thu May 08, 2008 2:02 am

[I belive by "to the letter" he meant exactly how it should be]
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Post by Skull Kid on Thu May 08, 2008 2:05 am

[yes, that's what I meant, I AM NOT a letter!!! let's just say I scared you and you passed out, but I'm not a letter, got it? good...]

Keshi looked over the limp form. "Oops..." he said aloud. Becoming bored, he began to forage for things to eat. Later, he made a frugal soup of the things he found. He wated for his guest to come to, stirring the soup now and again.
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