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Post  Skull Kid on Sun Feb 17, 2008 1:50 am

Keshi slept beneath a tree in the orachard of a large cottage. It was owned by a wealthy professor, who's only unkown knowledge was Keshi's presence.

He was eating peaches and having a grand time, when he was spotted by the professor. He sperated into many cells, and then scatterd. He reformed miles from the professors property. It was hard being an orphan in these times

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Post  J Box on Tue Feb 19, 2008 3:04 am

Are we suposed to add on to the story?

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Post  Wynn on Tue Feb 19, 2008 12:20 pm

I think so...
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Post  Cyclone on Wed Feb 20, 2008 2:21 am

We are supposed to post a part of the story. I have an even better idea! We only post a part of the story about our character and how they meet up. So mine would focus on my character and I say apart. Then someone posts about what their character thinks of the same situation.

Example: Joe saw a bird and thought he could fly.

Kevin saw a bird with Joe but he wanted to catch it.

That way we all know their thoughts.


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Post  Cyclone on Wed Feb 20, 2008 2:41 am

Here is my part.

Frnack was walking along a dusty path. Up ahead he saw a strange looking old man. He went up and talked to the figure. The man was shifty eyed and dirty.

Frnack said, "Hello sir, do you need help"? The man turned on him and tried to steal his axe. Frnack grabbed the axe and pointed it near the man's feet and shot a solid stream of flame at spot he had picked. The man was startled and he ran away. Frnack was glad that he had his axe. It was given to him by his father.

His father used to be a blacksmith in the town a couple of streets over. At the youngest age Frnack realized he had strange powers. He could burn things with his mind. He had been given the axe when he was only 6. The axe had helped him channel this power. If he didn't have this axe his power would run wild. The last time this had happend he burnt down most of a village they were kicked out of the town they were living in accused of witchcraft. Later that week as they had traveled his father had been collecting strange objects. When they finally reached their destination, Frnack's father had made him this axe. His father died soon after so Frnack kept the axe in rememberance of his father and to prevent the damage caused by this power. His mother had killed herself with a knife his father had made. Ever since then it was just him and his father. Now it was just him as he walked on the path in silence he regretted being alone for eight years. As he was contemplating this he saw a strange girl by the road.


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Jasmine-the begining

Post  gamequeen on Wed Feb 20, 2008 4:52 am

Jasmine sat on a hill, watching the young man she had followed for the last couple of weeks as he talked to the elderly man on the road. As she watched she tried to remember her past, but try as she might all she could remember was a younger version of this boy. She had woke up three weeks ago in an ally with no memory of where she came from. She knew that she had powers, and she knew everything about her self, her name, how to control her powers and everything. It was as though some one had deleted her past from her memory, and left all the other stuff there.

So she had followed this boy, the only thing she remembered from before the moment she woke up.

As she looked at the boy she relized that it was time to introduce her self to him, maybe he can tell me something about my past she thought.
So she stood and walked down to wait for him on the path. Finding a rock she sat to wait.

After about five min. he rounded the corner, standing she walked to meet him. "Hello, my name is Jasmine",she stated. Suddenly her vision blurred, feeling her knees shake she reached for him,she heard him yell to her,
as vision went black and she fell to the ground.


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Post  Cyclone on Wed Feb 20, 2008 2:32 pm

This is going to be cool.

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Kent's trouble

Post  Ace on Fri Feb 22, 2008 3:03 am

Kent kept wondering why it was so hard to find a Wealthy proffessors cottage in the woods. The only reason he was there was to find where his parents are. When he was young, a freak storm hit while they were on their boat. Lightning struck the boat where he was standing and sent him flying overboard . When he finally drifted ashore he was bewildered about what happend. When he rememberd he looked and looked but neither the boat or his parents were in sight. The only things he had were a dagger in his pocket,a long bow soaked and soggy, and a small quiver of arrows he managed to grab. A few days after the storm he noticed strange things with his sight. He could zoom in on things and have pin-point accuracy with his bow.

All of a sudden he heard sommthing a few meters away. He walked through some trees and bushes till he came to the area were the sound came from. Thats when he found the boy.
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Post  Wynn on Fri Feb 22, 2008 6:28 pm

Karrat accended into the time where she sensed the presence of these other people. He gorld arm band allowed her to transcend time, which she did as she pleased. She was a very quiet and helpful child, with not a friend in the world, n omatter what time period she visited. She followed the time of others, maybe she could make a friend in this period? She continued on the path, hoping that her luck would someday change.

Her lineage could be traced back quite far, but it only seemed like steps for this little time traveler.
She fell asleep beneath a tree, not able to shake off the feeling that someone else was about. She shrugged the feeling off, if someone attacked her, she could freeze them and escape. She'd never tried that tactic, but it reasured her when she feared being harmed.

The next day, she continued walking. She sang to herself quietly. She had a lovley voice, but she only sang when she wqs certian that no one else was around. An odd child she was, but she was helpful and handy when there was work to be done.
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Post  Wynn on Fri Feb 22, 2008 6:28 pm

[wait, why's it say I'm an admin?] [In RPGs, off topic things go in brackets by the way]
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Post  Ace on Mon Mar 03, 2008 12:46 pm

is this the end of the story or somthing or what?

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Post  Cyclone on Mon Mar 03, 2008 10:08 pm

We will add more later. It has been kind of slow lately.

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Post  J Box on Mon Mar 03, 2008 11:12 pm

[i dont uderstand this story... can somebody make a sparknotes version so i can get cought up?]

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Post  Cyclone on Tue Mar 04, 2008 1:17 am

Each person tells a part of the story. The story will link together later on.

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Post  J Box on Tue Mar 04, 2008 3:27 am

[oh, so its not exactly suposed to make perfect sense yet?]

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Post  Skull Kid on Tue Mar 04, 2008 12:19 pm

nope, but finding a way to blend all these different storylines would help, it's supposesd to be one story]

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Post  Cyclone on Tue Mar 04, 2008 10:15 pm

That is the secret to this story's sucess. I will post the next chapter soon I hope.

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Post  Ace on Wed Mar 05, 2008 3:19 am

So Kent find Keishi, Fr'nack and jasmine meet up, but i'm unsure about Karrat though.

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Post  Skull Kid on Wed Mar 05, 2008 2:24 pm

It's up to DP how they meet, so I can'yt tell you how that'll happen

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Post  Picori on Thu Mar 06, 2008 4:32 pm

Melody walked down the path, taking careful measure not to look into anyone she met's eyes. Her shyness came frm her parent's sudden and untimely death. Ever sience then, she hasn't had friends, not even a temporary aquaintance. She wouldn't even say "Hello" to the passerby.

Nothing could fill the void. But she didn't even try, and she knew it. Her gift of healing harm was useless with no one to heal, "I've got to meet new people..." she thought to herself.

But in her heart she felt that no one would ever come to think of her as friend, no one...
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Post  Cyclone on Mon Mar 17, 2008 11:24 pm

I am finally going to make the next chapter!

Frnack had just saw a strange girl. But before she could say much she passed out. He went over and picked her up. He carried her to a nearby town and gave her to the Nurse. Immediately the nurse got a shocked look on her face. "This girl is different", the nurse said.

"How is she different?" Frnack had to ask. Just then the was exploded. A man in an Iron suit burst in through the hole he started destroing everything in sight.

Just when the cruel figure looked at Frnack and was about to destroy him with his magical mace, a sound was heard. I was a rather low moaning sound. It was the girl he found! Then he stood to protect her with his life. He was suddenly thrust into the jungle. Everything was gone except that girl.

Using his Pyrokinetic prowess he created a fire to keep then warm. He stared at the girl she looked so familliar... He couldn't put his hand on it. After shruging off the weird feeling he bowed his head and went to sleep. But in his sleep all he could was the face of that girl. Then suddenly he jolted upright.

"How did we get here anyway?" He hadn't thought about that at all! He looked at the girl and saw that she had a strange pendent on her neck! Then he remembered where he had seen it! It was the Stone! The stone was spoken of in legends. There was seven of them. Each was given to a master of a certain power. Now he knew why that man with the mace had wanted her! She was one of the seven!


Take it away somebody!

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Post  Cyclone on Wed Mar 19, 2008 1:02 am

The Legend...

Once upon a time there was an evil creature upon the Earth. He was called The Consumer.

Whatever the consumer touched he absorbed and got bigger. He kept getting bigger and was threatening the health of the people in the country.

One day seven kids all had a strange dream they dreamed that a stone was going to come from the sky. The kids met eachother for the first time at the spot where the stone was coming.

When the stone hit the kids ran up to the stone and they all touched it. At the moment the stone gave off a very high energy source that the Consumer wanted. He ran to where the stone was and he saw the kids there.

With their hands still on the stone they shot out a beam out of their hands. Where the beams met they created a hole. Not just a regular hole though. They had created a hole in dimensions. The force of this hole consumed the Consumer and then the hole swiftly vanished. The stone had given the kids power.

The stone then shrunk and broke into seven pieces each one going to one of the kids. The kids then left for their towns with the stone and the mysterious power within it.

The kids grew up and their decendants seperated and their the story of the Chosen passed into legend.

But there was more, some people believe that certain decendants still have these powers and those stones...


Just to let you all know that the decendants of the chosen are

Keshi
Frnack
Jasmine
Kent
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Karrat
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Post  Wynn on Wed Mar 19, 2008 12:10 pm

Karrat continued on her way, sad and lonly. She'd given up hope of finding anyone. She continued along the way, humming a tune. Her gold armband began to glimmer. "Hm..." when it glimmered, it meant another decendant of the stone was nearby. Her stone was really more of a metal, but it was hers nonetheless.

But suddenly, a ghastly creature appeared behind her. She wasn't really a fighter at heart. She ran as fast as she could.
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Post  gamequeen on Wed Mar 19, 2008 5:36 pm

Black..that was all Jasmine seen in here half asleep state, except for a glance of sight every so often.

Stiring Jasmine rolled onto her side, but when her body pressed into the soft grass bed the boy had made for her she awoke with a start. Jumping up she weilded her kinetic sword,and glanced around ready for attack, but outside the lump of the person there with her she saw nothing but firelight.

"Where am I?" She thought to herself, "And who is laying over there?" Suddenly sleepy she strained her tired mind, "What is the last thing i remember?" suddenly she remembered falling in front of the boy she was going to talk with. But what had happened after that? Then with a flash of light she remembered a glancing memory of that boy jumping in front of her protectively. "But why would he do that?" "He dosn't even know me?"

After awhile she resigned to figure it out later, if that was in fact the boy laying over there he hadn't done her any harm so far, so he most likely didn't have bad intentions. So she slowly, and tiredly sliped back into the soft grass bed.

Why, was this boy so nice to her? Her entire life,{so far as she could remember it}, no one had showed her even a scrap of deccency. So why now? Why this boy? These thoughts were her last as she finally drifted off into a peacefull sleep.

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Post  Cyclone on Wed Mar 19, 2008 7:18 pm

This is getting deep! I like it!

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