Re: Way with Words!

gamequeen Tue Mar 18, 2008 11:09 pm

That was so good.
Cyclone I could'nt have put it any better. That was haunting, but in a good way.
You are very good at this. Cool

Cyclone Tue Mar 18, 2008 11:51 pm

Isn't she though?

Skull Kid Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:17 am

Keep it up!

triple h Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:18 am

DP wrote:Catchphrases
Drop the moon and an Icy stare! We'll destroy you, so there!-for a team of Skull Kid and Deku Princess

Rule hyrule and a raccon fool, fight with us and you're gonna get schooled!-for a team of Zelda and Tom Nook

you'll never bead the band of the mushroom kid and the puff from dreamland!-for a team of Toad and Kirby

Sega and Nintindo, usually a no-go, fighting together, they'll beat any foe!-for a team of Mario and Sonic

A zero suit and a princess to boot, not one foe can give pursuit!-for a team of Samus and Peach

A solid smoker and a dinosaur joker, they'll give any foe a swift hard choker!-for a team of Solid Snake and Yoshi

For porqupines they do just fine, it's not a genric design, it's mine!-for the Able Sisters

Poetry

"Redd" by Deku Princess
A sneaky fox, with a tight lockbox, he never knocks on the houses he breaks in, stealing things and leaving thier wallets quite thin. Do not be fooled by his happy smile, and his friendly term of "cousin", for in time i'm sure you'll find, con artists like him are a dime a dozen.

"Tom Nook" by Deku Princess
A sly racoon, he's coming soon, from eight past noon, neath' sun or moon. He'll sell his wares, but always stares, at bells he cannot have. His envy is clear, as he shuffles his rear, not in the best of health, intrested most in wealth. A sly racoon, he'll have your bells soon...

"Phyllys" by Deku Princess
She seems quite mean, but has anyone seen, a gentler side of her? Inside is she kind and careing, or is she always a bothersome burr? Nobody knows but her anger still shows, diffrent from Pelly in every way. And yet in a way, if she didn't stay, we wouldn't be the same this day.

"K.K." by Deku Princess
A dog all the way, from nosetip to tail. When it comes to the beat, this dog never fails. His songs are catchy, his lyrics in tune, and he'll pour his soul, neath' the light of the moon. And as a special thanks, for hearing his work, he'll give it for free, and not be a jerk. This dog who belts lyrics, at Brewster's cafe, you can only wonder why he doen't stay...

do you like them? More to come!

What is up with the poetry
MY BRAIN!!!!!!!!!!

Skull Kid Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:19 am

Your literacy is dry and tasteless!

Wynn Wed Mar 19, 2008 12:11 pm

Yeah Shadow!

gamequeen Wed Mar 19, 2008 5:44 pm

Hey, lets not insult one another or anything. Not everyone enjoys poetry, or understands it. We cant get mad at someone for their opinions on something.
Smile

Cyclone Wed Mar 19, 2008 7:16 pm

I think they are cool!

Wynn Thu Mar 20, 2008 12:07 pm

alright, if I could continue...

"The Briney Three" by DP

Kidnapped from their island homes

on a ship, on thier own

The king of thier land overthrown

three children, scared to the bone

They took command of a ship

Free from sting of lash and whip

And began a new life on the sea

So begins the tale of the Briney Three!

The captian of the brave young crew

was a sharp young lad by the name of Drew

he sailed that tiny sail boat true

Twas' the king of the Briney Three!

First mate, not second rate

was a quiet kid by the name of Nate

he did repairs, was never late

Twas' the brains of the Briney Three!

The tinyest member of the fleet

was little lass who's name was Skeet

She kept that tiny sailboat neat

For the crew of the Briney Three!

On the open sea

The Briney Three happened

Upon the squid

the mighty Kracken

So Drew he sailed the ocean blue

Nate he knew just what to do

and Skeet wanted to help them too

Twas' a test for the Briney Three!

Drew he sailed to shore, near land

Nate he longed for home and sand

But little Skeet, she had a plan...

To save the Briney Three!

She took some rope across some stones

and sailed that boat all alone

she'd prove that she could hold her own

Prove it for the world to see!

Drew and Nate watched from the shore

As the beast was caught and futhermore

Skeet dragged that Kracken ashore

Twas' the last day the Kracken did see!

Young Skeet did smile happily

to the boys who'd become her family

She showed them both that she could be

a help to the Briney Three!

And so the happy trio sailed

Through sunny days and windy gales

As the men on the shore all told the tale...

The tale of the Briney Three!

Cyclone Thu Mar 20, 2008 7:05 pm

That is cool! Did you make up the Briney Three?

gamequeen Thu Mar 20, 2008 9:34 pm

Cool!

Skull Kid Fri Mar 21, 2008 11:16 am

now we need a sequal...

Wynn Fri Mar 21, 2008 11:19 am

yes, I did, and here's the sequal!

"The Briney Three Sail Again!"

Drew, Nate and Skeet did meet

A most curious naval fleet

The Black Claws was thier name

No mercy was thier clame to fame

And so the Briney Three did sail

Tried to avoid, to no avail

The forces of the Black Claws

A battle they started, boredom the cause

Skeet watched from the starboard side

as Nate eyed his gift with pride

for he had built into the side

A cannon, now they couldn't hide!

Skeet she wanted to fire it off

but Nate just sighed and shood her off

So in her room she went to pout

She always felt very left out

They battle went well, or so it seemed

For soon the Black Claws did deem

them wet behind the ears.

Drew and Nate boarded the ship that they called thiers

Yet again, Skeet was alone

She felt she'd do it on her own

The pride she'd feel if she could fight

She's show those bossy boys the light!

She took the riegns

As she had before

But no one knew

what was in store

For Skeet was really only four

so just what could she do?

But yet again, she proved them wrong

As the little sailboat chugged along

She fired the cannon

She wasn't late

And sunk the ships,a clear checkmate!

She saved the Captian and First Mate

And so that night when she cooked the meal

They had a feast, each had thier fill

All a happy family

That went by the name of the Briney Three!

Cyclone Fri Mar 21, 2008 7:23 pm

Yay the sequel! How long does it take to write these? You are awesome!

I.C.E. C.O.L.D. Wed Jul 02, 2008 5:23 pm

Wow, these are good! Keep it up!

Cyclone Wed Jul 02, 2008 6:58 pm

They are really good except she hasn't made one of a very long time.

triple h Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:59 pm

that last one had so much i couldnt read it all
Good job!

Cyclone Thu Jul 03, 2008 3:39 pm

They are really good.

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